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Woof and Mia

October 5th, 2017 · 12 Comments · English, General News, Learning Habits, Year 4

a short story by Harriette, 4E

One peaceful day Woof and Mia were playing in Windsor Great Park. Woof is Mia’s little puppy.

They were happily strolling along when, suddenly, a sheep ran in their path.

“Baa” bleated the sheep “I am Chris, nice to meet you “, then he ran off into the distance.

“He was weird” woofed Woof “I wonder why he was running so fast.”

“I think I know why, look behind you Woof” Mia told Woof. There is a wolf and it looks like its hunting. Let’s run before it eats us” screamed Woof.

“Wait Woof you can’t judge a creature by what they look like” said Mia.

“I guess, but what if…” Woof started but before he could finish, Mia had gone over to the wolf and started to stroke it.

All of a sudden, she started to turn into a wolf.

“Mia are you ok?” asked Woof however wolf Mia turned and snarled.

“I like the look of you little dog, I think I am going to eat you” said wolf Mia.

Woof started to run away but wolf Mia followed him.

“Mia stop being like that, I am your friend”. By just saying friend Mia turned in to a good wolf.

“What just happened Woof” asked Mia. “I will tell you later” said Woof “I think we should try and find you a doctor to help turn you back into a little girl”.

So, they set off into the world to try and find a doctor for Mia.

At last they got to Spain and they found a doctor. “will she be alright?” asked Woof.

“She will be when she is human again”

In a week Mia was better and she had learnt that something, never stroke a wolf!

So, Mia and Woof lived happily ever after.


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12 Comments so far ↓

  • Millicent

    Great story Harriette!

    I liked how you how you changed ‘walk’ into stroll and used amazing wow words!

  • Sam

    Good tip Harriette, never stroke a wolf!

  • Sofia

    That was a great story Harriett I could picture it in my head

  • Chloe H

    To Harriette

    That was amazing. You are a very talented writer. You could be the next JK Rowling.

    Chloe x

  • James

    Amazing story Harriette! I liked that Mia turned into a wolf and then back again.

  • Noah G

    Great story Harriet it’s so creative I love it.

  • Effie

    Wow Harriette. Great story but I will never stroke a wolf manly because it might eat you.

  • Angel

    Wow Harriette! What a great story there. You put punctuations in your story which is great.It is a very creative story. What I loved in your story was that when I was reading the story, I saw a picture in my head about the story. Anyways, that was a very good piece of typing. Well done Harriette!

  • finn

    Awsome story Harriet I really love that story it’s amazing I could picture it in my head really well.

  • Will

    Nice story ,I like your adventure in the story .

  • Will

    Nice story,you had a good variety of story’s in your paragraph.

  • Effie

    Harriette this story is amazing I just have to read it .
    How did you get the idea of Mia turning into a wolf and stuff and why did you choose Spain for the doctor to be in?

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